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The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#money #space #research #mankind
It is said that
humans
 have
gain
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 great
successes
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success
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 from studying the outer world.
However
,
this
 investment should be used more efficiently for other fields. In my opinion, I partly agree with the statement. About a
half century
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 ago,
humans
 found a way to bring people out of
this
 world. A few years after, in
1970s
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, mankind achieved
an
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enormous success, by pushing astronauts to the moon by spaceship from the ground. It has brought a new age for science and many other fields. It gives the dream of accommodating
in
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 other planets to be the truth closer than ever. It may solve the issue of
over population
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 on the ground, which is extremely concerning in the 21st century.
For example
, a habitable planet like Mars is now
being test
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 to be a new house for
humans
. More than that, universal science
also
 helps the life below much
improved
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. Many services
in
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 the earth are now being
help
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 with
a
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 hand of satellites.
For instance
, people now
using
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 satellites map and images from outer
space
 to forecast weather, which
make
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 our life much more convenient.
However
, there are remaining many aspects
on
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 the Earth
need
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 carrying more carefully
instead
 of focusing on
space
 research. In many developing countries, infrastructures are lacking and need
helping
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 from all
the
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 world. But the governments just ignore and focus on
the
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space
 travel. It gives an imbalance in the development of the whole society.
For example
,
food
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 lacking issue is solved not much properly, since the investment for
space
 study
are
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 much bigger.
To sum up
,
space
 science brings plenty of benefits, but it could be used more effectively
for
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 other fields. The solution
of
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this
 problem for
humans
 is well
balancing
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 between
space
 travel and social aspects.
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