The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is said that
humans
have gain
great Change the verb form
gained
successes
from studying the outer world. Fix the agreement mistake
success
However
, this
investment should be used more efficiently for other fields. In my opinion, I partly agree with the statement.
About a half century
ago, Add a hyphen
half-century
humans
found a way to bring people out of this
world. A few years after, in 1970s
, mankind achieved Change the article
the 1970s
an
enormous success, by pushing astronauts to the moon by spaceship from the ground. It has brought a new age for science and many other fields. It gives the dream of accommodating Remove the article
apply
in
other planets to be the truth closer than ever. It may solve the issue of Change preposition
on
over population
on the ground, which is extremely concerning in the 21st century. Correct your spelling
overpopulation
For example
, a habitable planet like Mars is now being test
to be a new house for Change the verb form
being tested
humans
. More than that, universal science also
helps the life below much improved
. Many services Wrong verb form
improve
in
the earth are now being Change preposition
on
help
with Wrong verb form
helped
a
hand of satellites. Correct article usage
the
For instance
, people now using
satellites map and images from outer Wrong verb form
use
space
to forecast weather, which make
our life much more convenient.
Change the verb form
makes
However
, there are remaining many aspects on
the Earth Change preposition
of
need
carrying more carefully Correct pronoun usage
that need
instead
of focusing on space
research. In many developing countries, infrastructures are lacking and need helping
from all Replace the word
help
the
world. But the governments just ignore and focus on Change preposition
over the
the
Correct article usage
apply
space
travel. It gives an imbalance in the development of the whole society. For example
, food
lacking issue is solved not much properly, since the investment for Correct article usage
the food
space
study are
much bigger.
Change the verb form
is
To sum up
, space
science brings plenty of benefits, but it could be used more effectively for
other fields. The solution Change preposition
in
of
Change preposition
to
this
problem for humans
is well balancing
between Replace the word
balance
space
travel and social aspects.Submitted by nguyencamnhi on
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