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People from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficulty to get university education. Some people think that the government should make it easier for them to enter universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is argued that the government should help
people
 who can't attend university
due to
 unwealthy backgrounds. I totally agree with
this
 opinion. In the first place, I believe that allowing
people
 to get a universitarian culture is an added value for the whole
country
. I strongly support the importance of culture and knowledge to become a better person and,
consequently
, a better citizen.
Therefore
, to ease the opportunity to study after high school and to deepen personal
education
 could be kind of a weapon that all governments should use to become a greater nation.
On the other hand
,
people
 who come from poor backgrounds, and need to start working immediately after high school, are more likely to accept whatever job they are offered.
This
 situation can cause a higher rate of underpaid, exploited and even illegal work, which is exactly what a
country
 should try to avoid the most.
However
, I think that the possibility to get a higher level of
education
 should be given to those who prove deserving. In spite of their economic possibilities,
people
 who show some talent, ability or simply a good willingness to learn more and improve their knowledge should have the opportunity to do that. As long as individuals demonstrate to commit to enlarging their culture and to be worth the money
that is
 spent for their
education
, it is worth it. The more students a
country
 helps to reach a high level of
education
, the more likely the same
country
 will not have to face the problem of finding itself without a specialized workforce and brain drill. In conclusion, I believe that
education
 is the key to getting better
people
 and better dwellers,
therefore
 the money
that is
 spent to make easier access to university
education
 represents an actual investment.
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