Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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a heated debate.

While

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accept that

people

can use a computer to search for information about

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,

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also

believe that public

museums

and

art

galleries

play an important role

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learning historical lessons. On the one hand, there are a couple of vital reasons why

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agree

that

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about

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the Internet.

Firstly

, in

this

day and age, there is a lot of information about many fields, one of these is

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a historical

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field.

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is lead to users can easily find historical stories about their country, which they do not need

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to

museum

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the museum

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.

Secondly

,

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busy

people

who can not spend their time going to

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museum

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museums

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just use

computer

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a computer

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or electric

devices

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to access

to

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the Internet to see many historical objects and works.

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, students who learn in school all day can easily search for

history

on the Internet to

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understand

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.

On the other hand

,

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am

conviced

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convinced

that public

museums

and

art

galleries

are necessary for residents. First and foremost,

museums

are places where

people

can feel the pain of the past most clearly on the grounds that real historical sites are displayed in

museums

.

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long wars in the past, when citizens come to museum

displays

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and displays

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wartime

artifacts

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artefacts

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, they will

true

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feeling.

In addition

, in spite of the complexity of the web,

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museums

and

art

galleries

are the

trusest

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truest

trust

and they are the most factual source of

knowlege

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knowledge

. In conclusion,

although

computers or

electric

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devices can replace

the

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museums

in searching for historical objects and works, it seems to me that

the

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public

museums

and

art

galleries

still play an important role

with

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people

's

life

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to understand

history

.