the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011
The line chart illustrates the amount of three different communication types which are person, letter/email and
telephone
from January to June 2011.
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Overall
, there was Linking Words
dramatically
increase in person and Replace the word
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telephone
after Use synonyms
March
, Use synonyms
although
, people were using fewer and fewerLinking Words
letter
and Fix the agreement mistake
letters
email
between Fix the agreement mistake
emails
March
to May.
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Firstly
, the number of people which Linking Words
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face-to-face contact was always increasing from 400 to 1900. The Change the verb form
are preferred
telephone
users had stabled for one month from Use synonyms
March
to April, but, there was a sharp increase in Use synonyms
telephone
between April and May. The sharpest increase was about 450 people in person from Use synonyms
March
to April.
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, there was Linking Words
slight
decrease in letter users from January to Add an article
a slight
March
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