the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011
The line chart illustrates the amount of three different communication types which are person, letter/email and
telephone
from January to June 2011.
Overall
, there was dramatically
increase in person and Replace the word
dramatic
telephone
after March
, although
, people were using fewer and fewer letter
and Fix the agreement mistake
letters
email
between Fix the agreement mistake
emails
March
to May.
Firstly
, the number of people which are prefer
face-to-face contact was always increasing from 400 to 1900. The Change the verb form
are preferred
telephone
users had stabled for one month from March
to April, but, there was a sharp increase in telephone
between April and May. The sharpest increase was about 450 people in person from March
to April.
On the other hand
, there was slight
decrease in letter users from January to Add an article
a slight
March
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