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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

#examinations #student’s #performance #coursework #projects
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There is no doubt that these days , many schools used the traditional method to
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evaluate
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's performance .
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 , nowadays some schools tend to asses their
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 and
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. The question is , what are the effective ways to asses the
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these days
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In
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 essay , I am going to explain both views and draw my conclusion . In terms of the formal
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 ,
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numerous
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facilities
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 type of
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 in order to help a
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 to preserve information for a long period . The main reason to support
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 claim is that the formal
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assest
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assist
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 a
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 to memorise a huge information .To
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illustrate
,
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 method of
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assessment
 is based on repetition which leads to
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 the
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knowledge
 for a long time and
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 way is probably for certain
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such
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theoretical
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.
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,
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 are
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considered
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 and teachers .
Although
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 possibility positive
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 of
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examination
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 must be taken into account
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, there are many
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benefits
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assessments
assessment
 one of
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 is able
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students
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to
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discover their abilities .
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 ,another factor that must be
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considered
 is , the type of
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assessment
makes
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that makes
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to
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think out of the box . In conclusion ,in my eyes the traditional way of
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assessment
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 the ability of the
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, a new method of
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allow
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allows
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 the
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 to be more
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creative
creativity
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