Some believe that going to university is the best route to a successful career. While others believe that is it better to start work straight after high school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, whether to continue tertiary education is the best pathway to having a successful job opportunity for some people,

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others reckon that it's better to work just after graduating from secondary education and has heated debate and drawn public attention, I opine that finishing a

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can give a better career in the future. First and foremost, there is the public who wants to endeavour directly after obtaining a high school diploma

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of wasting another four and more years of study.

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, most young people go to work in construction just after high school since they can have a good salary compared to those others who finished a

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and cannot even find employment.

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unemployment and low ,wages it pushes other people to be practical, so

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of continuing to study in college they prefer to work and get a good salary.

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, there are more job opportunities if one has a bachelor's

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a better chance of having a higher salary. Even though

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it took them more years of schooling,

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of the day they can be rewarded for their patience and effort in studying,

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, doctors who spent six or more years at university will always have a good chance of employment with good wages, they can

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open their own private clinic

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working in different hospitals. Their chances of getting paid higher are more likely to happen, which only happens by pursuing a higher

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of schooling. Undoubtedly

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is a clear indication that one who has a

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is leading to good employment in

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competitive world. In conclusion,

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the reasons outlined above, I strongly believe that education is the key to success, it gives a wider career growth and opportunity

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provides a wide range of career choices.