More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list.

The

animales

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animals

are on the verge of

extinction

because there are

people

that are hunters, so

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one of the

millon problema

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of

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extinction

.

Besides

there are a lot of reasons,

for example

, there are exotic

animales

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animals

, like

lion

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lions

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, tigers o marine turtles, and there are

people

that

they

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want to have

this

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this animal

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animals

on

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their houses,

that is

one the reason. We can

to

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help the verge of

extinction

animals

take care of us,

also

, we can

to

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talk with

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people

, giving advantages about

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animals

, their importance in the world,

also

talking with the

childs

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children

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, at their schools,

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university

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, that we must help

to

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the

animals

,

also

that we must take care of

animals

. My reasons

of

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this

answer are that I know that the problem with the

extinction

animals

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of animals

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,

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is because

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because

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that

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everyday

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every day

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there are more dead

animals

, and

that is

bad for the world

,

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because the world needs those

animals

for

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to be healthier for the

people

. In conclusion, I think that we must have more take care

with

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the

animals

, not only

with

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the

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savage

animals

, or jungle

animals

, too with

the

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street's

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street

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animals

, with

the

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dogs or cats, so, we must

to

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be careful with all

of

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animals

, we must

to

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help us, we can give us food, or water, because they are tired, or they are bad. For the final, I think that we could

to

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do a project

for

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to help the

animals

.