The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given diagram illustrates the recycling procedure for aluminium
cans
.
Overall
, there are seven stages, with four main steps namely collecting, shorting, processing, and producing.
To begin
with, the process starts with collecting the cans
. people put the cans
into a special bin. After that, the workers come to pick up the cans
regularly by truck. The third process is cleaning, shorting, shedding and compressing with a modern machine. The machine cleans the cans
and proceeds to the next step, shorting. Next,
the cans
are compressed. Furthermore
, the cans
are heated and melted using a machine, the cans
become liquid. The liquid material goes to the next step, rolled up to 2.5 - 6 mm thick aluminium. The sixth step is recycling, the aluminium is formed into cans
. Finally
, the cans
are 74% recycled. The cans
are labelled with the company label and are ready to distribute to consumers.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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