the diagram shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
Depicted in the given diagram is the process of recycling
aluminium
cans
. There are several steps until they can be reused. These procedures are divided into collecting, recycling and producing processes.
Firstly
, valuable waste such
as aluminium
cans
should be put in a particular trash bin in order to ease the collection process. After that, the collector transports the cans
to the recycling factory with the truck.
Once in the factory, the cans
are cleaned, sorted, shredded, and compressed by using a recycling machine. Once this
has been completed, the cans
are ready to be entered into the heating and melting processes. In this
stage, the aluminium
cans
will be melted, and it changes to liquid form.
In the last
step, the liquid aluminium
is shaped to the rolling form with a thickness between 2,5 mm and 6 mm. Moreover
, the aluminium
rolls are moulded into bottles and cans
. The recycled cans
can be reused for commercial products. The UK has succeeded in recycling cans
, and they use 74% of cans
recycled in their beverage cans
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