Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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unprecedented technology and globalization,
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can access foreign-made
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within their
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without the need to travel. I believe
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trend brings more negative results rather than positives which will be discussed later in the essays. Most consumers prefer to use imported goods rather than local
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. Improved international logistics and lesser trade barriers present
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with multiples
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options from different countries and
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have little interest in their own domestic
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.
As a result
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, the role of cultural and domestic
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and
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who make a living out of producing those become less important. To illustrate, fewer
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in China wear Cheongsam and Changshan
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the arrival of international clothing brands. Young Chinese these days know the process of making traditional clothes and
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making them become jobless and switch to other jobs.
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, the ability to purchase similar
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has a negative impact on the
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’s culture and identity.
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, the availability of more and more of the same
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as other nations can cause a deficit in the income of the
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.
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foreigners don’t need to travel to a particular
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to enjoy and purchase local cuisine and
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as they can easily have them in their
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,
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, the tourism industry will suffer.
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, we don't need to go to Thailand to enjoy Thai papaya salad as there are a lot of Thai cuisine shops opening everywhere.
Second,
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large conglomerates are opening branches all over the world and many local businesses face a shrinking in the size of market share as they can’t compete with foreign companies in terms of economies of scale. Many local businesses suffer from price competition and become bankrupt.
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, the
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can face destruction
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the availability of similar
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from other countries and the government should introduce measures to protect from those happenings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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