Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this is a bad example for adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that
celebrities
are now well-known for their money rather than for what they achieved in their career paths, this
could be a downward trend for the youngster. In my opinion, I believe that these celebrities
could have a bad influence on the young. In contrast
, there are some stars who
are good for Correct pronoun usage
that
adolescents
.
First and foremost, celebrities
have a robust impact on youngsters through their glamorous lifestyle
. They usually upload their daily Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
life
on their social media accounts and attract many people, especially their fans, to show how wealthy they are instead
of showing their rewards or daily practices. Although
they are affluent, some of them become wealthy from other factors such
as families, friends or illegal activities. For example
, A was a famous star in B, she posted many pictures on his Facebook to show his richness. However
, the money he received came from his girlfriend by
forcing her for several years, which has a bad influence on the youngsters about receiving money without working. Change preposition
apply
Thus
, adolescents
could gain misleading information and have a different sight of life
from others which changes the way they live and become lazy in their work.
On the other hand
, there are many celebrities
who have a good impact on adolescents
through their behaviour and achievements. Due to
the good image
they have to build up, they have to show their effort for society and well-being behaviour. Add a comma
,image
As a result
, the audience could be impressed by their attitude,
and their social and daily activities which are similar to regular people. Remove the comma
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Such
celebrities
could inspire the youngster to work hard and pay more attention to social issues and activities instead
of having negative thinking about working and living. For instance
, singer A attracts many fans about
his simple Change preposition
through
life
and raises funds of a million dollars for his social volunteer projects for illegible children.
In conclusion, while
there are some celebrities
who have a bad impact on adolescents
through showing their wealth and glamourous
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glamorous
life
, some of them have a good influence on the youngster on the way they live. It is crucial for children to differentiate between whom they want to learn from.Submitted by thanhvinhdoi338 on
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