Some think that children should start school as early as possible, while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been a common argument between people about what is the appropriate

age

to start

school

. Some feel that it is better to start

school

as early as possible, the others believe, that they should not start before the

age

of seven. In

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I will explore both these

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and will

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celebrate

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each one of them can cause a different

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on

children

's ability to learn, and what they can achieve. I will

also

explain why I strongly believe that it is best to start

school

at 7 years old. The main advantage of

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starting

school

at an early

age

is that it allows toddlers to get

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to soft approaches

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learning, and to apply delicate methods

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them, and by

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they will be gradually familiar with them as they grow older. In Australia

for example

, small

children

at the

age

of 5 go to a kindergarten class inside the

school

itself, which

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a prep class. They learn inside classes

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activities adjusted to their

age

, but the transition into the first grade is much

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smoother for them.

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quite a few

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to

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as the pressure that

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them to grow up

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quickly

, wear uniforms, and be like older students, the anxiety to

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succeed

and

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out to the test,

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create mental issues at

such

an early

age

.

In contrast

, starting

school

at the

age

of seven

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will allow

children

to be more

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mentally

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to deal with

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such

as

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learning

to read and write, and they will develop the right skill set to handle tasks Like homework assignments and will be more mature and able to acquire knowledge. At

this

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it is easier to sit in class and focus and the methods the teacher

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applies

,

furthermore

,

children

at

this

age

have a better understanding of reality, and will not tend to break under the pressure of being a pupil. In Israel, after many

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attempts

to try to simulate what was done in Australia, It had recently decided to let kids

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be kids,

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they will start their

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preparations

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first

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year at

school

while

they are still in the

kindergarden

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kindergarten

, in an

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environment

that is

more relaxed, supportive and proper for them to develop correctly. In conclusion,

While

the

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decision of when it is the right time to start

school

will probably be an ongoing debate for many years to come, we must always remember who stands before us when we make a decision that can have a

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. I strongly believe that we should allow kids to develop

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the right time for them, and allow them to enjoy their childhood without additional disruptions.