Some think that children should start school as early as possible, while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has been a common argument between people about what is the appropriate
age
to start school
. Some feel that it is better to start school
as early as possible, the others believe, that they should not start before the age
of seven. In this
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views
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children
's ability to learn, and what they can achieve. I will also
explain why I strongly believe that it is best to start school
at 7 years old.
The main advantage of strating
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starting
school
at an early age
is that it allows toddlers to get expose
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exposed
of
learning, and to apply delicate methods Change preposition
to
on
them, and by Change preposition
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that
they will be gradually familiar with them as they grow older. In Australia Add a comma
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for example
, small children
at the age
of 5 go to a kindergarten class inside the school
itself, which called
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is called
educational
activities adjusted to their Correct word choice
and educational
age
, but the transition into the first grade is much more
smoother for them. Change the word
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there
are
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drawback
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drawbacks
this
approach such
as the pressure that affect
them to grow up Change the verb form
affects
quickliy
, wear uniforms, and be like older students, the anxiety to Correct your spelling
quickly
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put
out to the test, Add a missing verb
being put
can
create mental issues at Correct pronoun usage
which can
such
an early age
.
In contrast
, starting school
at the age
of seven,
will allow Remove the comma
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children
to be more mentaly
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mentally
prepare
to deal with Wrong verb form
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task
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tasks
such
as learining
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learning
this
age
it is easier to sit in class and focus and the methods the teacher Add a comma
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furthermore
, children
at this
age
have a better understanding of reality, and will not tend to break under the pressure of being a pupil. In Israel, after many attemps
to try to simulate what was done in Australia, It had recently decided to let kids Correct your spelling
attempts
to
be kids, Change the verb form
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Therefore
they will start their preparetions
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preparations
preparation
to
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for
first
year at Correct article usage
the first
school
while
they are still in the kindergarden
, in an Correct your spelling
kindergarten
envirnment
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environment
that is
more relaxed, supportive and proper for them to develop correctly.
In conclusion, While
the the
decision of when it is the right time to start Remove the redundancy
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school
will probably be an ongoing debate for many years to come, we must always remember who stands before us when we make a decision that can have a severely
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. I strongly believe that we should allow kids to develop Correct pronoun usage
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