the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university

the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university
The graph illustrates the biology school in the present and in the plan.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the number of trees will be declined in the plan
while
there are additional factories that will be constructed nearby Particularly, at the moment, there are 5 trees on the southwest of the
map
until these will be replaced by a car park for staff located
at the end
of the road. On the north of the
map
, some trees will be replaced by a lab and office that built next to each other. In the middle of the
map
, the drama centre will appear in the future until the drama centre is vanishing.
While
there are additional teaching buildings and lecture rooms and they all link to each other which appeared as two of them
instead
of one, the IT centre itself will be extended in the plan and occupy the southeast of the
map
.
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