the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university

the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university
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The graph illustrates the biology school in the present and in the plan.
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, what stands out from the chart is that the number of trees will be declined in the plan
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there are additional factories that will be constructed nearby Particularly, at the moment, there are 5 trees on the southwest of the
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until these will be replaced by a car park for staff located
at the end
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of the road. On the north of the
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, some trees will be replaced by a lab and office that built next to each other. In the middle of the
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, the drama centre will appear in the future until the drama centre is vanishing.
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there are additional teaching buildings and lecture rooms and they all link to each other which appeared as two of them
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of one, the IT centre itself will be extended in the plan and occupy the southeast of the
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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