The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
Over a
year
, East Africa had a wide range of rainfall
and temperature
monthly. At
the first 2 months of the Change preposition
In
year
, the amount
of rain is below 50 milimetres
. The same Correct your spelling
millimetres
amount
of rainfall
poured also
going
low during Wrong verb form
went
Add an article
the mid
mid
Add a hyphen
mid-year
year
, specifically on
June until September, with the lowest over the Change preposition
from
year
in July. On contrary
, the Correct article usage
the contrary
amount
of rain is higher during
March until May, with Change preposition
from
the
peak Correct article usage
a
at
April Change preposition
in
by
300 Change preposition
of
milimetres
. During the Correct your spelling
millimetres
last
three months of the year
, the amount
of rain is decreasing.
Similar
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The similar
trend
shown
by the Add the auxiliary verb
is shown
temperature
in East Africa. Overall
each months
, the Change to a singular noun
month
temperature
is around average with
44 Change preposition
at
degree
Celcius, going up Change to a plural noun
degrees
with
Change preposition
to
it's
highest Correct your spelling
its
temperature
by 24 degree
Celcius Change to a plural noun
degrees
on
March. Change preposition
in
This
trend
slowly going
down until July, with 20.5 Wrong verb form
went
degree
Celcius and started going up again until October.
In summary, the Change to a plural noun
degrees
rainfall
and the temperature
in East Africa have the same trend
. When the temperature
increases, so does the rainfall
. But, the temperature
trend
tends to increase and decrease a month earlier compared to the rainfall
data.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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