In some countries, some criminal trials in the court are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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the crime
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content
this
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are
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is
benefits
.
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the benefits
first
and foremost point that these days Add an article
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crime
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women
people
as they spend most of the
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their
while
watching these shows .Needless to say , Correct word choice
apply
due to
this
watching these types of Content on television,they can enhance their power of thinking and stay alert about the current issue because in Correct determiner usage
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this
shows content is real .For examples
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example
crime
which telecast on colors
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and in
this
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this
, people
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toward
love
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make
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makes
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doubt issues . Moreover
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also
watch this things
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same
things in their real life .Correct article usage
the same
consequently
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shows
crimer
can easily Correct your spelling
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crimes
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remove
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murder
number
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things
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crime
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and proof.
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