The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given blueprint describes the future refurbishment in the city of Brandfield which have two options in order to construct a new shopping

centre

Overall

, there are several places that have been built

such

as a golf park in the southwestern

area

, an industrial estate in the southeastern

side

, and a city

centre

placed in between those two infrastructures. Meanwhile, a housing estate is on the northern part of the map. The first option is that the mall will be constructed in the northeastern

area

next to the housing complex. It will be surrounded by a river on the eastern

side

, a railway on the southern

side

, and a road on the western

side

While

the second choice is to build the shopping

centre

in the southeastern

area

near the city

centre

and industrial estate.

In addition

, there is no river flowing in

this

particular

area

However

, if the leader chooses to add the mall on

this

land, it will have two pavements both on the western and northern sides and a railway on the eastern

side

around it.

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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