The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given blueprint describes the future refurbishment in the city of Brandfield which have two options in order to construct a new shopping
centre
.
Overall
, there are several places that have been built such
as a golf park in the southwestern area
, an industrial estate in the southeastern side
, and a city centre
placed in between those two infrastructures. Meanwhile, a housing estate is on the northern part of the map.
The first option is that the mall will be constructed in the northeastern area
next to the housing complex. It will be surrounded by a river on the eastern side
, a railway on the southern side
, and a road on the western side
.
While
the second choice is to build the shopping centre
in the southeastern area
near the city centre
and industrial estate. In addition
, there is no river flowing in this
particular area
. However
, if the leader chooses to add the mall on this
land, it will have two pavements both on the western and northern sides and a railway on the eastern side
around it.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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