Nowadays in western countries, couples are choose to have no children, and for this issue there will be advantages and disadvantages, this essay will discuss both sides.
There are numerous advantages of having no
children
, firstly
, financially speaking, income will be consumed by two person
only, without any additional expenses Change to a plural noun
people
such
as children
’s school tuition and medical bills. Additionally
, couples
can save a good amount of money and have a lot of fun trips. Around the world. Also
a big chance for investment to secure a remarkable retirement plan. Add a comma
,Also
Second,
less responsibility as the only thing to worry about is the other adult partner without any attachment. Third,
having the freedom of reallocation, couples
can change their life plans without any consideration , As an example they can change their home location, city, and maybe country easily without having any restrictions.
On the other hand
, elder couples
who choose not to have children
will face loneliness and boredom, because they will live by themselves with no one will look after them which may cause some mental illness
Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
such
as anxiety and depression. As well as
, other health issues like breast cancer, as a female, breastfeeding reduce
breast cancer. Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
Moreover
, several illnesses require a relative blood or organ donation, and by having no children
no relatives will be available for donations. Not only that, this
decision will discontinue the family tree. All the family histories and legacies will no longer continue.
In conclusion, nowadays many western
Correct your spelling
Western
couples
choose not to have children
, and every decision has it
Change the pronoun
its
advantage
and disadvantages.Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
Submitted by dr.yushi on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion