It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is true that a
risk
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will change one's
life
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in both ways. Either it can be
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change or it can be negative. It depends on luck. In my thinking, the
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is well said that risks have advantages in
life
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. First and foremost,
Life
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is a name of
risk
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.
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, some people go in tense
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wether
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it is good to take
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or not. They will never get succeeded in their
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because they
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failed to take
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risk
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risks
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For example
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, big
compaines
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companies
are taking risks to start their business in terms of investment. These
type
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of owners will get success in their
life
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.
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is the
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explanation
for professional lives.
Secondly
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, taking
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risk
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will build confidence in the
mind
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of individuals and they will move to
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level of
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game
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, in
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their personal
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life
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a man has lots of activities which are good
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health
as well as
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wealth. Like, in
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modern era everyone has some property
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it is a home or land. It can be seen that human beings who took risks in their
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to migrate their land with other land or with money can gain profit
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loss. But their
mind
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opened after observation of
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the result
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result
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results
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in terms of
risk
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. They
charged
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with an extra skill which is not to be afraid
while
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taking
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risk
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risks
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.
This
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is another advantage of taking
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risk
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To conclude
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,
although
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risk
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the risk
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has
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a 50
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50 50
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50-50
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chances
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chance
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of getting profit or loss
but
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, everyone has to be
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the clear
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mind set
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and
has
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positive thinking during taking
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risk
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a risk
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. It can make 50
percent
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per cent
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chances of profit to more than 80
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per cent
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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