Writing Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

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Dear Lucy Hello! How are you? I am fine. I hope you and your family are well.

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with, I have a lot of news in my life. To cut it short, I am just writing to let you know that I changed my

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. I am sure you will like my new occupation. Mainly, I started my new

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in my hometown. As you know, I had been working in a cafe for 2 years. But, I changed it to a new one.

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why, my previous

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is very boring.

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, its salary was few for me. My new

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is a designer. The reason why, you know, I am good at drawing a picture.

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, I choose it.

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, I began

this

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two weeks ago. And

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, my new profession is interesting and incredible for me.

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, if I earn some money, I will open my new sewing shop. By the way, I will visit yours next month.

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I tell you about my new ideas. I will wait for a letter from you. I am looking forward to catching up with soon! I love you in any way! Warm wishes Nigina.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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