Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

#friend #jobs #job #news

Hello Sanjar, I hope my letter will find you in the pink of your health. If you remember I constantly tell you I will be a builder but as I am getting older I understand that it is not my

job

because simple builders do not well-paid and they cannot achieve a lot of things I added

this

job

requires hard-working people but I lazy person so

that is

why I decided to change my dream

job

. Nowadays I am a teacher

this

job

is very good and I work a part-time

job

it very suits me and the school is well contact which is I work and I take a good salary

as well as

I work as a school director. It is a very relaxing

job

for me and I do not stay at school a lot and I can easily spend plenty of time with my family it is very lovely. I have a range of news

such

as nowadays I bought a new car which is very beautiful and expensive if you come to my home I show you my car and we can remember our friendship time. Best wishes, Abubakr.

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6 paragraphs

195 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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