Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

Hello Sanjar, I hope my letter will find you in the pink of your health. If you remember I constantly tell you I will be a builder but as I am getting older I understand that it is not my

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because simple builders do not well-paid and they cannot achieve a lot of things I added

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requires hard-working people but I lazy person so

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why I decided to change my dream

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. Nowadays I am a teacher

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is very good and I work a part-time

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it very suits me and the school is well contact which is I work and I take a good salary

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I work as a school director. It is a very relaxing

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for me and I do not stay at school a lot and I can easily spend plenty of time with my family it is very lovely. I have a range of news

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as nowadays I bought a new car which is very beautiful and expensive if you come to my home I show you my car and we can remember our friendship time. Best wishes, Abubakr.

saydusmonovasomiddin94

May 22, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

At present a lot people use traditional medicine rather than going to the doctor. Is this a positive or negative development?

More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern society, ambition is more and more important. How important is ambition for being successful in life? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?