The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures
The process diagram illustrated the various stages in processing dairy products and their varieties.
Overall
, Linking Words
this
process involves 2 main steps which are the farming and the factory steps and Linking Words
also
8 stages are involved in the production of the Linking Words
milk
.
The 1st step which is the farming process begin with the rearing of Use synonyms
healthy
cow which are allowed to graze on grass Add an article
a healthy
the healthy
in
the farm to increase their Change preposition
on
milk
production, Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
milk
machine is been put into place to extract Use synonyms
milk
from the healthy cows. The Use synonyms
milk
extracted from the healthy cows is stored in a storage refrigerator which helps to maintain a cool temperature before the vehicle (tanker) conveys the Use synonyms
milk
to the processing unit where the Use synonyms
milk
is been separated into various varieties.
From the processing unit, the Use synonyms
milk
is separated into Use synonyms
milk
products which are been pasteurized, packaged and distributed to the supermarket and some are been made into butter, cheese and cream Use synonyms
also
packaged and distributed to the supermarket. ,Linking Words
Linking Words
Finally
all ends with the consumers.Add a comma
,Finally
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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