The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures
The process diagram illustrated the various stages in processing dairy products and their varieties.
Overall
,
this
process involves 2 main steps which are the farming and the factory steps and
also
8 stages are involved in the production of the
milk
. The 1st step which is the farming process begin with the rearing of
healthy
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a healthy
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cow which are allowed to graze on grass
in
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the farm to increase their
milk
production,
then
the
milk
machine is been put into place to extract
milk
from the healthy cows. The
milk
extracted from the healthy cows is stored in a storage refrigerator which helps to maintain a cool temperature before the vehicle (tanker) conveys the
milk
to the processing unit where the
milk
is been separated into various varieties. From the processing unit, the
milk
is separated into
milk
products which are been pasteurized, packaged and distributed to the supermarket and some are been made into butter, cheese and cream
also
packaged and distributed to the supermarket. ,
Finally
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all ends with the consumers.
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