The Chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart gives information
abut
the percentage of people who visited four different tourist attractions in Britain and the table graph Correct your spelling
about
show
the proportion of Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
visitors
to five different activities in Themes Park during the
1999. Change the article
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Overall
, the two most attractions for tourists were themes
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theme
parks
and zoos. Moreover
, for visitors
to themes
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theme
parks
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,parks
the
beautiful place was the Blackpool Pleasure Correct article usage
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beach
. In terms of the pie chart, Theme Correct your spelling
Beach
Parks
, museums and galleries got the same percent
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percentage
visitors
. 16 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
visitors
in Britain chose to see the historic houses and monuments,
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when
only 9 Correct word choice
while
percent
of them visited Change the spelling
per cent
wild life
zoos and Correct your spelling
wildlife
parks
. Regards to table chart, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the tourists' favorite
park. 17 Change the spelling
favourite
percent
and 16 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
visitors
chose to enjoy activities in Pleasureland and Alton Towers theme parks
, while
the least visited parks
were Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor.Submitted by tukezaliyeva96 on
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