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The Chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

The Chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
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The pie chart gives information
abut
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about
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 the percentage of people who visited four different tourist attractions in Britain and the table graph
show
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shows
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 the proportion of
visitors
 to five different activities in Themes Park during
the
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1999.
Overall
, the two most attractions for tourists were
themes
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theme
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parks
 and zoos.
Moreover
, for
visitors
 to
themes
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theme
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parks
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,parks
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 the main and
the
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beautiful place was the Blackpool Pleasure
beach
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Beach
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. In terms of the pie chart, Theme
Parks
, museums and galleries got the same
percent
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 of
visitors
. 16
percent
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per cent
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 of
visitors
 in Britain chose to see the historic houses and monuments
,
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when
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while
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 only 9
percent
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per cent
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 of them visited
wild life
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wildlife
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 zoos and
parks
. Regards to table chart, Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the tourists'
favorite
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favourite
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 park. 17
percent
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per cent
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 and 16
percent
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per cent
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 of
visitors
 chose to enjoy activities in Pleasureland and Alton Towers theme
parks
,
while
 the least visited
parks
 were Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor.
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