You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Hey Deeksha! How are you? I hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I was thrilled to receive your letter

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you mentioned your interest in knowing detailed information about the upcoming Olympic

games

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Games

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that are taking place in Canada. As you already

know

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know,

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my country of residence got the honour of hosting the 2024 Olympic

games

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great news is published by punchy media

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as Instagram and Facebook. It's

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the headline of many newspapers across the globe.

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competition is taking place in Toronto in the month of March. All the citizens of my nation are incredibly excited about

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wonderful news because they will get a chance to watch live matches.

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, it will enhance my country's revenue as a multitude of

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coming to our country next year. I'm enthusiastic because I'm a part of the National Sports Stadium.

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my schedule will be hectic during

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event because I have to work overtime as an employee of the sports department, I will get five free passes to enjoy live matches; I can bring my friends and family to the stadium as well. I'm excited and ready to capture some unforgettable moments. Best regards Sandy

sdeepkaur9

Oct 11, 2023

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logical structure

Try to add one idea per paragraph. Start a new paragraph for each point.

coherence and cohesion

Keep a smooth link from one part to the next. Use simple joins like 'and', 'also', 'but' to connect ideas.

tone

Friendly tone and opening.

content

Clear link to why people care about the story.

personal relevance

Shows a personal tie to you.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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