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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

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Introduction
Nowsdays
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Nowadays
,We see
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a variaty
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variaty
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variety
buildings
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of buildings
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 and houses all
of
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over
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 the world.
Body paragraph 1
Noumous
plople
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people
 tend to
curiousity
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curiosity
 about their
history
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 of houses or buildings
dring
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during
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 living.
Body paragraph 2
thoes
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those
 both sides of
this
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 issue should be considered thoroughly.
Body paragraph 3
To begin
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 with ,Having a
history
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 of
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house
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a house
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 is a
safy
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safe
safety
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makes
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that makes
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interesting
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it interesting
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 to live
a
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in a
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house
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.
Body paragraph 4
Seeing a
dameg
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damaged
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 part of
wall
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the wall
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tend
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tends
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 to your worries and
concered Becuse
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concerns because
,
this
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is
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apply
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can
be have
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have
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 more serious problems in the future.
moreover
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 ,finding
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a relarter
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relarter
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reporter
related
relater
 who has
information
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of
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on
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history
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 would help to understand collecting
information
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. there is
cure
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the cure
a cure
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 to
cheak
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check
a
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the
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history
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 of
record
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records
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 in the
house
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.
Body paragraph 5
On the other hand
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, using
history
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record
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records
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is a
hamful
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harmful
to
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in
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sale
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selling
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 the
house
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.
thoes
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those
information
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 could occur particular
purchers
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purchasers
 who will be wished a large room gives unsatisfaction.
Body paragraph 6
For example
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compay
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company
 has not sold for 1year. the
resons
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reason
 is that spreading
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the rumor
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rumor
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rumour
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 around
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the neighborhood
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neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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 affect
marke
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market
 value so people
wondering
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wonder
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 about
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history
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the history
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 of
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house
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the house
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.
this
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 is
drawback
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a drawback
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effact
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effect
 for a building sale price .In
this
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 case, showing the
history
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 record of weakness impact forward to live a
house
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.
Conclusion
To sum up
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, Personally ,I assume that
knowlogy
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knowledge
 of
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history
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the history
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a
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of a
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house
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 is important .thoes
resons
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reason
is
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are
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 shown living space can be essential to gain diverse
information
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 for safe.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • historical significance
  • community
  • belonging
  • cultural heritage
  • personal connection
  • architectural styles
  • real estate value
  • market demand
  • educational opportunities
  • local area
  • historical research
  • landmarks
  • traditions
  • values
  • premium
  • inhabitants
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