Many believe that the best way to ensure a happier society is to reduce the difference in income earnings between the rich and poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Happiness is generally equated with feeling content. It is a common notion that the elimination of the disparity of revenues will lead to a more joyous community. I extensively agree with
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thought, and I will elaborate on my reasons for the same.
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, there is a large gap in the incomes of the wealthy and the poor.
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gap is unhealthy for the neighbourhood, as it drives a wedge between these
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. The nature of the circumstances of
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's birth is not under their control, whether
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is born in an affluent family or a poverty-stricken
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.
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often leads to jealousy as it is native thought, that it is us who
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the privilege and not the other.
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bitterness, if diminished, might lead to a more content fraternity.
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, children who attend private schools in the United States, are twice as likely to be attacked by students who attend public schools than young ones in their own institute.
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, the impoverished section of our society struggles to make ends,
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the upper class wastes money on their lavish lifestyles.
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, it is common for essential resources like food, to be wasted in fancy households. Because of
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, it might be a necessary move to cut the monetary gap between the various
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classes
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.
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move may, in turn, lead to a well-fed clan which would result in a better mood for them.
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, in the UK, five tonnes of food is wasted annually by the high society,
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only a ton of food is wasted by the folks below the poverty line. In comparison, by the number of people, the commodity loss by the rich is 500 times that of the lower
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. In conclusion, the move to bring an
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deficit between the finances of all
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is a welcome
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.
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might bring forth an era where everyone has their necessities met,
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also
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resulting in a more cheerful society.
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task response
Ensure that the essay clearly addresses the prompt and fully develops the arguments in relation to income disparity and happiness in society.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, but the logical structure could be improved by organizing the arguments more effectively.
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