People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how they are affecting people - say what the company should do to help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
email to formally complain about the poor Internet
connection in my area. My name is Jee, located at 10 Euclid Avenue, Markham and we have been experiencing intermittent internet
issues since last
week. Please allow me to explain.
Last
week, the city people dug up the road to repair potholes in my area and I believe they interrupted the underground cables for the internet
supply. They said the cables were placed in the same position as it was before, however
, the internet
connection has not good
since that time and we are having frequent disconnections.
Add a missing verb
been good
Furthermore
, such
connectivity issue impacts our community, for instance
, remote workers are disconnected from work , students are unable to attend online classes, and retail stores are unable to take payments due to
the weak signal and it is dropping out every few minutes.
I would like to bring this
to your attention as it is causing serious trouble in our community. Hence
, I kindly request you to send a technician as early as possible to resolve this
issue in a timely manner. I am available at 123-456-9012, please let me know if you have any further
questions.
I look forward to hearing your response as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
JeeSubmitted by jeeanay on
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Greeting and Closing
Consider starting your letter with a polite greeting phrase such as 'I hope this letter finds you well.' It's customary to start and end letters with polite phrases in formal writing.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that this is developed sufficiently. Combine related ideas within paragraphs to improve cohesion.
Logical Structure
The overall structure of the letter is adequate, but the arguments presented would benefit from clearer and more detailed reasoning. Including specific examples would improve the logical development of ideas.
Complete Response
It is important that the letter thoroughly addresses all bullet points provided in the task. Consider expanding on each point, giving more detailed descriptions and fuller explanations of the issues and suggested solutions.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone is appropriately formal for the type of communication. However, the writer should ensure they maintain a respectful and formal tone throughout their letter, avoiding casual language.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite