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Young people are more likely to be involved in car accidents, therefore the legal driving age should be raised to 22 years old. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #car #accidents #age #years
In
this
 contemporary epoch, the number of
people
think
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 that
car
accidents
 are raising day by day in order to reduce it. Authority should be increased the legal driving age of teenagers
upto
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up to
 22 years old. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
this
 notion, which I shall discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, owning to several reasons that emphasise, what it should not be
up lifted
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uplifted
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 to 22
year
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years
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. Primarily , it is the best age to get
license
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a license
the license
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 of driving
car
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a car
the car
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. To elaborate more, coming
upto
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up to
 18 ,
individual
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individuals
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 faced lots of situations and
problem
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problems
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in
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apply
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between 13 to 18 and they get
lot
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a lot
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 of experience and knowledge of the study and real life which helps to become a mature person to apply for
license
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a license
the license
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.
Thus
,
this
 knowledge helps them to clear the test and able to person become
safe
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a safe
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 driver.
Therefore
, it leads to
positive
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a positive
the positive
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 impact on young
people
.
For instance
,
a
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research revealed that young
people
 are
capable
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more capable
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 of
drive
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driving
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car
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a car
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 rather than older
people
 because of
ability
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their ability
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 and no weakness in the body.
On the other hand
, there are some aspects that determine, the raised of
car
accidents
are
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is
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 not
reason
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the reason
a reason
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of
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for
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 young one.
The
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Accidents
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accidents
 can
also
 happen
due to
the
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apply
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bad roads or
car
 problems. To a greater extent fact is that sometimes roads are not plane
due to
 overuse of road or it is made up of bad quality raw material.
Moreover
, sometimes cars which they liked to travel
that is
 not sustainable for roads.
For example
,
tourist
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tourists
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always travel in cold places by
car
 but some cars are not capable
on
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in
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 hill areas which leads to a number of
accidents
 just because of
car
 facilities.
To conclude
, it is clear from
above
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the above
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 discussion that
although
 there are abundant factors that examine it is not the problem of young
people
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people's
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 age .
However
, it
also
be
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is
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 affected by cars company facilities.
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