Nowadays people prefer to shop at the modern market then add traditional market do you agree or disagree

Nowadays everyone
is habituate
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to doing shopping
as well as
modern and traditional
makert
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market
purchase.these days Humans
are
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apply
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mostly prefer both
shoppings
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shopping
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like
modern
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the modern
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market
along with
traditional
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the traditional
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market
. In
modern
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the modern
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market
makert
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,makert
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if we ordering from
the
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apply
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online some items are good and some are not good
weather
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whether
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it is
vegetable
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vegetables
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or clothing items or kitchen idols there are different types of shopping are there in the
market
. They
coming
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to
traditional
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the traditional
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market
like 50
percentage
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of the are preferred traditional shopping like
who
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those who
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are not have work or the people who are
housewife
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housewives
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they
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apply
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go to shops and they purchased the items in
traditional
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the traditional
a traditional
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way.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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