Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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there are too many chances to study abroad. It can help boost confidence

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education level. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of foreign educational programs. The first advantage is that the student will live his own life in a foreign. It means that everything is to be done by yourself. You have to be self-dependent during your studies.

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will help to increase mental sharpness

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makes human beings dutiful.

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, Educator knows if he works harder, he will survive easily on the earth.

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, it will be difficult to exist on foreign land. The second benefit is that many foreign countries are offering free-of-cost studies. Even, if you study in their country they will give you a monthly stipend of some amount which can be used for personal expenses.

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, the countries provide a duration

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studying to work for payment.

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, a Healthy environment helps the young to live healthily

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there are strict laws which protect humans from any violation.

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as, Germany is a beautiful country, that provides free of cost education to master-level educators.

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, out-of-home country studies have some drawbacks in terms of family distance, and the culture of the homeland.

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, human beings can face tough routines like, studying

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to exercise which should be mandatory for individuals.

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out-of-country learning has a huge number of benefits but

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has some disadvantages.

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