The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following graph illustrates the highest recorded temperatures, per month, for three different cities in Australia, in 2016.
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, we can see that recordings remained relatively stable throughout the year in Darwin.
On the other hand
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, Melbourne and Perth saw much greater fluctuations, with the highest measurements made in January, and the lowest in July. When analysing the results for Darwin, we can depict that
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was the hottest city on average. November had the highest measured temperature at 33.3 degrees
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, July had the lowest recording, with 30.5 degrees
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. Meanwhile, in Melbourne and Perth, we can visualise from the data a much different picture. Both cities peaked in January at 25.8 and 28.1
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respectively. We
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see a gradual decline up until July, where both Melbourne and Perth have their lowest temperatures on record, at 13.4 and 18.8
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respectively. From there on we see an incremental rise in recordings up till December.
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