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The best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#price #fuel
In the modern era, all masses have their car because it shows class in the community. Many
people
 say that
government
 should raise the rates of
fuel
 to mitigate the environmental issue. I largely disagree with that notion because it is not an effective way.
To begin
 with, All individuals depend on the car globally. It is necessary for
people
 nowadays. To explain
it
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, If
government
 raises the price of
fuel
,
people
 cannot afford it. It
is
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not only affected individuals but
also
 affected the
government
such
 as transportation charges would be increased.
This
 causes will inflation in the entire country.
Although
 the
government
 should raise the
fuel
 price,
people
 cannot stop using vehicles because they have a busy schedule and are tired from their workload so they prefer
own
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 car for comfort and to go out on their time.
For instance
, the
Government
 of India increased
fuel
 prices threefold within a year but cannon see any difference in the environment.
Secondly
, vehicles do not only emit pollution but
also
 factories do too. Authorities should enhance laws against industrial factories, that pollute the air and river. Before raising money for
fuel
 the
government
 should improve public
transport
 because of that
people
 are more attracted to discovering new things. Public
transport
 is not available everywhere so the
government
 does work on it
such
 as timing the duration between buses and connecting the countryside area.
For example
, the
Government
 of the USA revealed that after improving public
transport
, 30
percent
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 masses use it
instead
 of using their vehicles. Authorities have a big number of followers so they can start a social media awareness to save the environment or arrange a campaign in cities. In conclusion, my view is that authorities should improve public
transport
 and enhance strict laws against industries, and it is wrong to raise money for
fuel
that is
 not beneficial for us.
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