As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays,
people
's habits have been changing with the web,
also
there are unique things that come from human history like a
newspaper
. In my ,opinion all of the
people
in the
world
need the
internet
and need to read something
such
as news and magazine from papers.
Firstly
, the values of the
internet
can be accepted by everybody in the
world
. The web has got many important benefits,
for example
,
people
can contact each other at too many distances.
Thus
, the short distance is
helped
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to education for every student in the
world
such
as lessons. Maybe the most important
things
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thing
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for young
people
is access to every knowledge for their homework and studies in the
world
. The
internet
has become the biggest
newspaper
, magazine or encyclopedia. But the papers should not be lost its values yet.
On the other hand
,
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the
a
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newspaper
is always important in some generations
such
as baby bombers and X-generations.
Therefore
these
people
were taken every information about life and
world
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the world
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from the
newspaper
. ,
Also
the development of
Internet
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the Internet
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is very quick these days. Sometimes
people
can not learn new things about the web.
For example
, there are a lot of social sites on the net. But older
people
or teenagers need to take up a small part of new technologies,
in particular
,
this
is
the
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important thing for our development. In conclusion, the
internet
has become the best common way of almost every part of life
the
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day by day.
Therefore
the best acceptable thing is for the future and
this
time. But, the most important thing is the paper of all humanity and they need protection for the future
also
.
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  • Access
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