Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event on your country b. Describe the public event C. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he /she will visit

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Dear Linda, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I'm writing

this

letter to invite you to the New

Year

festival celebrated next month. As you know

this

our national occasion which we celebrate as our new

year

This

is called Sinhala and the Hindu new

year

. We have so many traditions to follow these days and it takes four to five days to finish the events. You may be amazed by our customs.

While

we were studying together

last

year

you promised to visit me and, here is the chance.

Moreover

, it will help you in the project you are doing on "globalization and tradition". You are welcome to bring your parents along if they can spare the time. As my family is

also

eager to see all of you. Hoping to see you soon. yours loving Preeti

Submitted by pmmadushani123 on Wed May 24 2023

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

145 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event on your country b. Describe the public event C. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he /she will visit

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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is avery difficult task. what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What are the best ways to overcome them?explain an include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems.

Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.