Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for a country, while some think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The international sports event is being conducted for decades and whoever hosts these
events
are always beneficial in the form of economy and sportsmanship. On the other hand
, A coin has always both sides - Good or bad so arranging the events
cause some problems as well such
as scams, crime etcetera. In my opinion, It has more pros than cons.
If we discuss the benefits, the very first benefit of hosting is that it accelerates the economy of that province. Public from other countries travel to the host country
and increase the local business. They book tickets, and hotels and spend money living for such
a period, by which the host country
gain more sale. For instance
, when the Olympics were held in Rio-de-jenrio it increased their sales by 20%. Not only do they increase sales but also
they gain the cultural knowledge of another country
. They participate in cultural events
such
as dance activities which made culture more famous around the world.
On the other hand
, these events
increase the crimes in the city where are conducted. Some local crowds start robbing the tourist as a means of giving help. Some people start charging double-triple and sometimes 10 times the rate for the product. This
creates a bad impression on tourists. They think every person in that country
is a thief and share the same with their own people after reaching their home country
. These events
also
create big scams politically. For instance
, the Commonwealth Games held in India in 2010 witnessed fraud of Rs. 70,000 crores which damaged the image of India.
In ,conclusion It can be stated that despite some negative points, there are more benefits to hosting events
in a country
. Only hosting countries need proper planning and management to avoid such
mishappenings and people should also
feel responsible for maintaining the reputation of their country
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- moreover
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- however
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