Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

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modern era, most
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socities
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societies
prefer to seek the actual
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through the
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instead
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of
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newspapers or
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TV
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programmes. In my opinion,
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is a negative development which can influence the crowd
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addicted to their
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and is potentially harmful since not all of
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news
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on the
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can be trusted. One serious problem that can rise society to spend plenty
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scrolling
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to obtain the latest
news
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.
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situation will impact to them
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become addicted to their
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in order to keep
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with the actual
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. It is harmful
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their health especially in
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of
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due to
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transferred from
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to our eyes.
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, the number of
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who
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glasses
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increase
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over
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time. Another issue is that not all of
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news
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from the
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provides
a trusted
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trusted information
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information
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which is called a hoax. It might
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happen since many people can create their own
news
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and post on the
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without
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to receive
a
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permission. It is harmful
for
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to
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people's life if they can not
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appropriate
news
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from credible
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accounts
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that share
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information
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.
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, in early 2020 when COVID-19 outbreaks around the world, there were many
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on the
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that impacted
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the majority of people became panicked.
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, individuals must be mindful in order to obtain
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news
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from the
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, so they can avoid
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addicted and
receive
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receiving
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a vague
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information
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.
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,
government
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the government
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should make a regulation to give
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punishment for society or
company
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companies
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spread
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spreading
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a hoax
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hoax news
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news
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on the
Internet
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.
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