Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

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this
modern era, most
of
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socities
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societies
prefer to seek the actual
news
through the
Internet
instead
of
read
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reading
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newspapers or
watch
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watching
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TV
news
programmes. In my opinion,
this
is a negative development which can influence the crowd
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addicted to their
gadget
and is potentially harmful since not all of
news
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on the
Internet
can be trusted. One serious problem that can rise society to spend plenty
hours
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scrolling
their
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through their
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gadget
to obtain the latest
news
.
This
situation will impact to them
that
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become addicted to their
gadget
in order to keep
update
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updated
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with the actual
information
. It is harmful
for
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their health especially in
term
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of
eye sight
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due to
the blue light
that is
transferred from
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to our eyes.
Therefore
, the number of
folk
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folks
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who
using
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glasses
are
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increase
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over
the
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time. Another issue is that not all of
news
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the news
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from the
Internet
provides
a trusted
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trusted information
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information
which is called a hoax. It might
be
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happen since many people can create their own
news
and post on the
Internet
without
have
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having
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to receive
a
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permission. It is harmful
for
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to
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people's life if they can not
selected
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appropriate
news
from credible
account
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accounts
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that share
this
information
.
For example
, in early 2020 when COVID-19 outbreaks around the world, there were many
hoax
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hoaxes
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on the
Internet
that impacted
to
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the majority of people became panicked.
To sum up
, individuals must be mindful in order to obtain
a
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news
a piece of news
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news
from the
Internet
, so they can avoid
became
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becoming
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addicted and
receive
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receiving
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a vague
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vague information
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information
.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
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should make a regulation to give
a
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punishment for society or
company
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companies
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spread
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spreading
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a hoax
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hoax news
a piece of hoax news
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news
on the
Internet
.
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