Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
In
this
modern era, most of
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apply
socities
prefer to seek the actual Correct your spelling
societies
news
through the Internet
instead
of read
newspapers or Wrong verb form
reading
watch
TV Wrong verb form
watching
news
programmes. In my opinion, this
is a negative development which can influence the crowd become
addicted to their Fix the infinitive
to become
gadget
and is potentially harmful since not all of news
on the Add an article
the news
Internet
can be trusted.
One serious problem that can rise society to spend plenty hours
scrolling Change preposition
of hours
their
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through their
gadget
to obtain the latest news
. This
situation will impact to them that
become addicted to their Correct pronoun usage
apply
gadget
in order to keep update
with the actual Wrong verb form
updated
information
. It is harmful for
their health especially in Change the preposition
to
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
eye sight
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eyesight
due to
the blue light that is
transferred from gadget
to our eyes. Fix the agreement mistake
gadgets
Therefore
, the number of folk
who Change to a plural noun
folks
using
glasses Wrong verb form
use
are
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apply
increase
over Fix the agreement mistake
increases
the
time.
Another issue is that not all of Correct article usage
apply
news
from the Add an article
the news
Internet
provides a trusted
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trusted information
a piece of trusted information
information
which is called a hoax. It might be
happen since many people can create their own Unnecessary verb
apply
news
and post on the Internet
without have
to receive Change the verb form
having
a
permission. It is harmful Remove the article
apply
for
people's life if they can not Change the preposition
to
selected
appropriate Change the verb form
select
news
from credible account
that share Fix the agreement mistake
accounts
this
information
. For example
, in early 2020 when COVID-19 outbreaks around the world, there were many hoax
on the Change to a plural noun
hoaxes
Internet
that impacted to
the majority of people became panicked.
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apply
To sum up
, individuals must be mindful in order to obtain a
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news
a piece of news
news
from the Internet
, so they can avoid became
addicted and Wrong verb form
becoming
receive
Wrong verb form
receiving
a vague
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vague information
a piece of vague information
information
. Therefore
, government
should make a regulation to give Add an article
the government
a
punishment for society or Correct article usage
apply
company
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companies
spread
Wrong verb form
spreading
a hoax
Remove the article
hoax news
a piece of hoax news
news
on the Internet
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