The following diagram illustrates how the recycling of waste paper is treated.
The following diagram illustrates how the recycling of
waste
paper
is treated.
It is noticeable that the process of waste
paper
recycling has 6 main stages, starting from the collection of waste
paper
and ending with a machine.
It can be seen that the first stage
of the process is when waste
paper
is collected from public paper
banks and from businesses. After having been classified by hand, paper
with low quality is removed. High quality
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High-quality
paper
, in contrast
, is kept to use for the next stage
. Then
, the paper
is transported to the paper
plant in order to create pulp
.
After collecting pulp
from grinding paper
, the next stage
is cleaning. Other materials such
as staples are taken out of the pulp
. Following
this
is De-Inking
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the De-Inking
stage
. Inks and glues are removed. The final stage
is a paper
-making machine. The pulp
is produced by a machine to be useable paper
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