The diagram below shows how olive oil is manufactured

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The diagram gives information about the process of olive

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production

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, it is clearly seen that there are seven processes to make olive

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. The whole process starts with growing the

olives

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and ends with selling them in stores and storage places. Looking at the details,

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are grown in a tree and after that labours start picking the

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and rinsing them in cold water. After that

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were put in the machine belt and it goes into a huge container where the

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are smashed by smashing them they will convert into two products one is olive paste and another one is olive stones. The olive paste is put into the bags with holes and those bags were gone for pressing. After pressing it goes into the process of separating. Once the separating is done two forms are present the first one is

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and the second is water. At

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olive

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is sent into storage and for sale.

Submitted by nikitakumari on Wed May 24 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, olives with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

163 words

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The diagram below shows how olive oil is manufactured

Human activities have negative effects on the plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this question. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is better to run your own business than to work for someone else. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

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Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Some people do not eat meat and fish. They think that it will better for health and also world. Discuss the the view and give you opinion.