The diagram below shows how olive oil is manufactured
The diagram gives information about the process of olive
Overall, it is clearly seen that there are seven processes to make olive
oil. The whole process starts with growing the
olivesand ends with selling them in stores and storage places. Looking at the details,
olivesare grown in a tree and after that labours start picking the
olivesand rinsing them in cold water. After that
oliveswere put in the machine belt and it goes into a huge container where the
olivesare smashed by smashing them they will convert into two products one is olive paste and another one is olive stones. The olive paste is put into the bags with holes and those bags were gone for pressing. After pressing it goes into the process of separating. Once the separating is done two forms are present the first one is
oiland the second is water. At
oilis sent into storage and for sale.
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