In some areas of the US, are 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
In some
areas
of the US, a curfew
has become an important act to perform because of the increasing crime
rate
.While
sometimes it is essential to impose a curfew
to stop street crimes
. However
, it is not a good solution. This
essay will argue why imposing a curfew
in a city
is unbeneficial.
In those areas
where the crime
rate
is too high a curfew
should be imposed there. For instance
, children
under 15 years
can get easily involved in crimes
. In addition
, they have no idea how to protect themselves. As evidence, children
under 15 years
have fresh minds so that they can easily absorb anything. If they will observe crime
or bad activities they can encourage themselves and their friends in it. Overall
, in curfewed areas
, children
under 15 years
should not be allowed to be out of doors after 9 O`Clock at night.
However
, a curfew
should not be imposed in a city
or in areas
of a city
. Because it is not a good idea to stop or decrease the crime
rate
. Instead
of imposing a curfew
, our government should educate people of the country or a city
including younger and their parents in order to decrease the crime
rate
. As an example, this
curfew
also
restricts children
's activities and their freedom. In addition
, children
over 15 years
have the ability to protect themselves and can justify between good and bad things.In sum, imposing a curfew
is not a beneficial way to overcome the crime
rate
.
In conclusion, when in a city
or in the country street-crimes
increases government prefer to impose a curfew
in which teenagers are restricted to go out of their homes without their parents. This
essay discussed that this
is good for under 15 years
because they can not protect themselves and can go towards committing crimes
. But on the other hand
, these restrictions affect children
's freedom and action. In my opinion, I disagree with imposing a curfew
. I think the government of the country should follow another way to stop crimes
. Such
as, by educating the public.Submitted by uzzam_khan110 on
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