A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Animals are widely used by humans for different purposes at various times. It continues to be controversial if they should have

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with man and their exploitations by individuals should cease.

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there are valid points to both views, I am of the opinion that it is fair to treat these lesser creatures the same way as homo sapiens.

Enthusiatists

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Enthusiasts

of equal

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among all creatures claim that lions, elephants,

dogs

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and dogs

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have

live

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as people do. They point out that these

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also

have the same composition of

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system as individuals. These include the circulatory, respiratory, digestive and excretory

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. These made them in no way below mankind and

therefore

, they should be treated in the same way human beings are treated.

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, it is believed that

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of some creatures by persons affects them mentally and psychologically.

For instance

, reptiles, carnivores,

herbivores

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and herbivores

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amongst others kept in zoos are restricted from carrying out the daily activities they would perform in their natural habitats, they are fed

on

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meals different from their natural diet and are made to exhibit behaviours abnormal

to

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them so as to entertain tourists. A recent study shows that

majority

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of mammals develop psychological

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when exposed to extreme conditions or torture which make them manifest behaviours

such

as

agression

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aggression

, withdrawal to self and other harmful habits. Opponents of

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equality point out that men and women have always used horses, camels,

donkeys

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amongst others to satisfy their needs since the beginning of time. They are created lesser than people and

therefore

, they should be treated in

such

ways. Moreso, hunting and killing them is the source of livelihood for some societies. A recent survey carried out in the

easthern

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eastern

part of Nigeria concluded that over 70% of the population are hunters and approximately 80% have bush meat as their only source of protein.

Lastly

, religiously, the

christians

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believe that God commanded them to have dominion over all other living things.

As a result

, they have every

right

to use them as they see fit without any guilt. In conclusion,

although

there are advantages to employing animals to satisfy

ones

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needs, regardless,

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exploitation has caused a lot of negativities to the earth than its merits and these include certain species extinction and

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of

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the natural attitude of animals.