Some people believe that it’s important to spend a lot of money on family celebration while others think it’s a waste of money. Discuss both views

In some circumstances, celebrating an event is require a huge amount of money.
Although
it is allowed to celebrate a paramount day, it is
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unwise to
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a big party for every event.
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essay will discuss why only
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glamour parties are acceptable. It is commonly believed that
people
should
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fancy parties as the
ocassions
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occasions
only happen once in a
life time
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.
This
because
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the host party want to share happy moments
to
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their
suroundings
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surroundings
.
Furthermore
, several cultures across the world believed that they should provide
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huge parties
such
as the wedding and the funeral.
For instance
, Batak is one of the cultures in Indonesia,
this
culture has
obligation
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to create a fancy party
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older
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generation
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funeral, the older person who died, the more fancy it is.
As a result
, Batak
people
are well known as the rich
people
.
On the other hand
, nowadays young
people
are intent to create a simple celebration limited
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only their beloved ones. It is because the host
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to enjoy the moment without strangers and it could save a lot of money.
For example
,
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private wedding
commonly
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attended by fifty
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a-hundred guests and all of them are the friends and the families of the bride.
Consequently
, the bride
are
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more thrilled enjoying every single moment without concerning strangers' opinions and financial issues. In conclusion, society could
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an intimate event with their close friends and families in terms to save
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money. Meanwhile, in order to respect the cultures,
people
can create a glamour one as long as
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happy with that. The most paramount thing in
this
phenomenon is either the hosts or the guests are able to enjoy and
to
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celebrate with a grateful heart.
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