The diagram below shows how ceramic pots are made. Write an essay for a university lecturer describing the process.

The diagram below shows how ceramic pots are made. Write an essay for a university lecturer describing the process.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ceramic pots are made. Write an essay for a university lecturer describing the process.
The diagram portrays the manufacturing process of ceramic
pots
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in the
factory
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in Homeland.
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, the production of ceramic
pots
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consists of 12 steps, which is started with the digging of
soil
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and finished with the production of
pots
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.
Soil
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is used as a raw material for the production of ceramic
pots
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.
Initially
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, the
soil
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is excavated from the ground by a huge digger and
then
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transferred by lorry to the
factory
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in Homeland. Once the
soil
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is entered into the
factory
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, it is poured into crushing machines and crushed twice.
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small particles of
soil
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are mixed with water to make a paste. Following that, the paste is moulded and ,
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subsequently
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it is dried for 4-6 hours to evaporate water and be assembled. These assembled clay
pots
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are placed in an oven at 1000 degrees Celsius for some time.
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, they are placed inside the colour bin to be coloured.
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the coloured ceramic
pots
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are placed into an oven for a second time and are fringed with colour.
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, the finished
pots
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are packed and stored in a warehouse of the
factory
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and ,
,
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consequently
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the ceramic
pots
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are distributed to markets.

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