You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

With the rising population of major

cities

, more concerns regarding people's

health

are emerging among

the

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society , mainly people think that it impacts a

persons

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well-being negatively, I personally partially agree with

this

notion , as living in the big

cities

can

also

have positive

health

effects ,

this

essay will explain both impacts . First , living in big

cities

can come with lots of

health

problems that can come from many sources ,namely , pollution , densely populated areas ,

stressfull

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stressful

life styles

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and the list goes on , that said , I am going to be talking specifically about pollution , as

this

is a problem that

alot

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a lot

of big cites face , and can severely affect , breathing and eating , which are

essentail

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essential

for our survival ,

for instance

, the city of Mumbai India is said to be one of the biggest worldwide,

furthermore

, the death rates from air

quality related

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diseases is

reltively

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relatively

high

,

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because the city is very polluted from its vast population .

On the other hand

,

while

there are many

health

risk factors in larger

cities

, the healthcare quality is better than that in small towns or villages ,

therefore

, the frequently ill citizens are more likely to get treated ,

on the contrary

, those in towns ,

although

not

geting

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getting

sick as much , still face some illnesses ,

however

, not always do they get the proper treatment .

To sum up

, living in big

cities

can be bad for one's

health

,

however

, it can

also

provide the best treatment to those who are victims

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the dangers of living in those areas , unlike others who live in rural or

samll palces

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small places

who

in contrast

get less sick but don't have the privilege to get diagnosed in a proper way .