You recently learned that a close friend of yours has had a baby, and you purchased a gift for the baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Congratulate them on the arrival of the baby Describe the gift you have chosen for the baby Suggest arrangements for your visit to deliver the gift.
Dear Aaprajta,
I hope you are doing
welt
after your delivery. I want to congratulate you on the arrival of Correct your spelling
well
baby
girl and I cannot wait to see both of you .
I am so glad that you gave me a Chance to become an aunt and my excitement is at its peak. As you know, I always wanted to give something precious to your baby so I decided to gift a gold Add an article
a baby
the baby
bracelet
to her. Previously, I was planning to buy a crib but suddenly I shifted my idea to a gold bracelet
. Since the baby is so tiny right now, the bracelet
will not fit well but after some months she can wear it conveniently.
The idea behind purchasing gold is that it can be used as a purpose of investment
in future which will be
will be beneficial for her. I am visiting your home Verb problem
apply
this
weekend with cake. The bracelet
will be delivered through XYZ company next Monday as it takes time due to
the manufacturing process.
I hope you will love my present and it will fit to infant’s wrist when she grows.
Yours truly,
Harmeet KaurSubmitted by harmeetkohli31 on
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language
Some phrases, such as 'I hope you are doing welt after your delivery' and 'it will fit to infant’s wrist when she grows,' need minor corrections for clarity and accuracy. Consider revising these to 'I hope you are doing well after the delivery' and 'it will fit the infant’s wrist as she grows.'
logical structure
Incorporate more transitions between ideas to improve flow, such as 'Additionally' or 'Furthermore'.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear and appropriate greeting and closing, creating a friendly and warm tone.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph effectively communicates a single idea, making the letter easy to follow.
complete response
You have successfully accomplished the task by addressing all the prompts in a clear and concise manner.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is very suitable and friendly, which is appropriate for a letter to a close friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,