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Band 6.5

Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.
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The given pie charts depict the proportion of
world
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fores
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forces
 and
timber
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 owned by five continents across the
world
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.
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, it seems that North
America
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 has dominated the production of
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fores
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forest
 and
timber
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 with the average
percentage
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 for both
is
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being
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 just over a quarter
from
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of
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world
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 production.
While
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,
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 the lowest
percentage
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 belongs to Asia that only has 16%
percents
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percent
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in
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 average. To be more detailed, within
fores
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percentage
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 across the
world
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,
country
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the country
a country
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 having highest
percentage
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 is Africa reaching approximately a quarter. It is slightly different with North
America
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 providing a quarter of
world
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fores
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forces
.
While
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,
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 Asia give the least
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fores
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force
 which is less than a fifth. It is obvious that, within the
timber
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 proportion, North
America
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 is the region providing the largest number of
timber
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 for less than a third. The second-best region is South
America
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 which is different
with
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from
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 North
America
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 in a very small number. The smallest one is Africa
that
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 has less than one in ten.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, fores, timber, america, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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