Task 1: The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.
The given pie charts depict the proportion of
world
fores
and Correct your spelling
forces
timber
owned by five continents across the world
. Overall
, it seems that North America
has dominated the production of fores
and Correct your spelling
forest
timber
with the average percentage
for both is
just over a quarter Wrong verb form
being
from
Change preposition
of
world
production. While
,
the lowest Remove the comma
apply
percentage
belongs to Asia that only has 16% percents
Fix the agreement mistake
percent
in
average.
To be more detailed, within Change preposition
on
fores
percentage
across the world
, country
having highest Add an article
the country
a country
percentage
is Africa reaching approximately a quarter. It is slightly different with North America
providing a quarter of world
fores
. Correct your spelling
forces
While
,
Asia give the least Remove the comma
apply
fores
which is less than a fifth.
It is obvious that, within the Correct your spelling
force
timber
proportion, North America
is the region providing the largest number of timber
for less than a third. The second-best region is South America
which is different with
North Change preposition
from
America
in a very small number. The smallest one is Africa that
has less than one in ten.Correct pronoun usage
which
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, fores, timber, america, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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