In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicales will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicales outweigh the disadvantages?

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Artificial Intelligence has seriously taken over many human activities with
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evidence of better performance, despite
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benefits in
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issue. Technology has improved
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its delivery so much in recent times that if care is not taken, human beings will become useless very soon.
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vehicles will give luxurious comfort to the owner as you do not have to exert any energy
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, the inventors of
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robotic
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are not sure of what the outcome will be.
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Intelligent car got to a stop sign post and did not stop because the
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had been impaired, it was slightly scratched and the sensor could not pick
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led to an accident. I strongly
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that
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invention will do more
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than good as there is no significant benefit of driverless
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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