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The diagram illustrate the two options to contract a school in Canterbury habitant area.

The diagram illustrate the two options to contract a school in Canterbury habitant area.
The diagram
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the two options to contract a
school
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 in
Canterbury
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the Canterbury
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habitant
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habitat
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 area.
Overall
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, it is seen that the two options propose to build the
school
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 within
living
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the living
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 area
however
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 the first
school
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 proposed to be erected in the middle of the town
center
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centre
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 where there
no
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is no
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 traffic around. The option considers the fact that the
school
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 can be reached by those who leave in Sturry and Chartham settlements within almost the same time as the distance is the same for both. It is five
kilometers
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kilometres
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 distance from these areas to
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the toen
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toen
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town
 centre. The second
options
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option
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 provides the
location
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 point to the
school
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on
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in
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 the
country side
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countryside
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opf
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of
 the town.
Such
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location
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a location
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 point is far from the town
center
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centre
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 and situated
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besides
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beside
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 the housing district. It
Moreover
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,
such
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location
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a location
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 will ease the road for kids who live in Sturry what can not be said about children who live in the southern
location
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as
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apply
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for example
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 those from Chartham
.
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?
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 Kids from Sturry will spend
a
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apply
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half time when compared to the time in case
if
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apply
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school
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 is in the
center
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centre
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, location with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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