Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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some people that conducting medical research to figure out safety factors was
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cruel and non-sense,
while
others believed it is important for medical purposes.
Although
this
trend has some drawbacks, personally I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. It is common thing using
animals
to do experiments ,especially for studying purposes.
To begin
with,
mice
are used to test a new medicine and find out the side effects of that drug,
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it is so inhumane because torturing and even the
mice
became death.
Moreover
, if
this
kind of experiment frequently occurs, as a
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result population of
mice
could be reduced in the future.
Thus
, we need a variety of
animals
to do that test,
instead
rely on
mice
.
On the other hand
, there are several benefits of
this
activity
such
as reducing the potential hazard for
humans
as well as
developing medical inventions,
as a consequence
can be used to save human life.
Firstly
, using
animals
will reduce the possible risks that can be emerged from experiments and tests.
Besides
, since
this
activity was prohibited in the early 1990s, so it will not break the government's rules.
For instance
,
mice
are usually used to figure out novel drugs to save human life during the coronavirus outbreak.
Thus
, utilizing
animals
is safer rather than directly testing on
humans
.
Secondly
, It is
also
cheaper if use
animals
compared to
humans
.
As a result
, the expenditure to do research will affect the medical cost of drugs affordably as well. To illustrate, one research using
mice
only takes US$ 1000 compared to
humans
could be US$ 120,000.
To conclude
, some people think that using some
animals
is rude and cruel, even though using
animals
has some demerits
such
as being inhumane and unacceptable by some
animals
defender, I personally believe the advantages could save human life and assist novel inventions for medical studies.
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