Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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some people that conducting medical research to figure out safety factors

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cruel and non-sense,

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others

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it is important for medical purposes.

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trend has some drawbacks, personally I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. It is common thing

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animals

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to do experiments ,especially for studying purposes.

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are used to test a new medicine and find out the side effects of that drug,

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it is so inhumane because torturing and even the

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became death.

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kind of experiment frequently occurs, as a

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result population of

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could be reduced in the future.

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, we need a variety of

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to do that test,

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, there are several benefits of

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activity

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as reducing the potential hazard for

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developing medical inventions,

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can be used to save human life.

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will reduce the possible risks that can

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from experiments and tests.

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activity was prohibited in the early 1990s,

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it will not break the government's rules.

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,

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are usually used to figure out novel drugs to save human

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during the coronavirus outbreak.

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is safer rather than directly testing on

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cheaper

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compared to

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.

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, the expenditure to do research will affect the medical cost of drugs affordably as well. To illustrate, one research using

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only takes US$ 1000 compared to

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could be US$ 120,000.

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, some people think that using some

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is rude and cruel, even though using

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has some demerits

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as being inhumane and unacceptable by some

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animals defender

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, I personally believe the advantages could save human life and assist novel inventions for medical studies.