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Certain countries protect their native industries by imposing heavy tariffs on imported goods. Other countries encourage imports in order to ensure their citizens access to as many goods as possible. Should countries be allowed to impose high tariffs on imports or should all countries allow each other free access to their markets? What do you think? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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I strongly hold the view that All individuals in the world should have access to as many
goods
 as possible. In
this
 essay, I will provide more detail from my perspective. As well all know,
Technology
 is moving very rapidly, and improving
technology
 has a significantly vital role on the modern planet.
According to
 investigators especially online shopping has been becoming more popular compared to previous. Some
countries
 which have developed
technology
 produce different improved
goods
.
On the other hand
, folks who are living in undeveloped
countries
 do not have access to as many
goods
 as possible because their
countries
 do not have enough
technology
 and unfortunately they can not afford the price of imported products. At
this
 point, we have to consider encouraging imports as a government and public. One of the main steps which can be done is to rise imports in order to access all
goods
 on the earth. As I mentioned before, Nowadays people who are using online shopping have increased and they do not want to pay tax rightly. From my point of view, All
countries
 should encourage imports in order to for the happiness of the people. Individuals should buy a product that they want easily. All native markets should be left free. In
this
 way, humans can buy
goods
 as long as they afford and find them.
To sum up
, we should not use heavy tariffs on imported
goods
 as a government.
This
 would bring us tremendous benefits.
This
 world is all ours and we have to help each other. advantages of
technology
 tend to make us get close. I deeply believe that in the future tax-free will be in the world.
Submitted by celil--1907 on

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