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While people in developing countires are happier than in the past, people in developed are less happy . Why ? what can be learn from this ?

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Varied opinions have to be put on the table to explain that .
However
 , some
countries
 on the way to development make
people
's
life
 gonna be better but the opposite in developing
countries
 do not feel happy with that. From my perspective , will give an explanation for the above lesson.
Firstly
,
people
 need to maintain their work-
life
 balance in which they might prevent being depressed and have plenty of problems relating to their
life
.
Secondly
,
besides
 money,
people
 should take care of discovering themselves to make their
life
 more meaningful On the hand, some
countries
 on their way to development feel happier because they think money can make their activity happier and easier to do something if they gonna be rich in the future.
Moreover
 , they do not know what happened in the future if their
countries
 develop too fast and they do not have enough time to do too much work.
However
 , developing
countries
 are happier because they think it makes their
life
 better than before so
people
 feel satisfied with that.
On the other hand
 , all of the developed
countries
 they worried about that because when everything increases they need to pay more for their activity. And inflation will become more
for instance
 the salaries increase by 2% but you need to pay for the renting house more than $200 a month so no point in that. In a number of
society
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 they have passed through a process and some
people
 feel depressed. In summary , I learnt something about that lesson . If you want to get more benefits means you have to through difficulties.
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